Thanks, everyone for all the happy wishes for my anniversary this past weekend! We stayed off our electronic devices, which was nice.
The winner for Reckless Heart by Amy Clipston is……..drum roll……..
Thanks, everyone for all the happy wishes for my anniversary this past weekend! We stayed off our electronic devices, which was nice.
The winner for Reckless Heart by Amy Clipston is……..drum roll……..
My kids have one week of school left! I’m excited because I don’t have to get up quite as early, but to be honest, I’m not looking forward to 8 extra hours of bickering. I’ll probably rent a camper and park it in the backyard. Not sure if I’ll put them or myself in it.
I’m working on revising the 2nd novel I wrote. I was ecstatic about this book when I wrote it and thought I knew it all without ever reading a craft book (this is where you seasoned writers shout, “Amen!”
Can I just say…for the love! It’s taking me longer to revise than my other mss because it’s pitiful. PIT-EEE-FULL!
But salvageable.
The plot is solid. I’m pretty good at plot, I’ve yet to be asked to revise one (I have been asked to revise numerous other things.)
For example, every key scene for my MCs were in a bed. LOL Nothing going on that shouldn’t, it’s just they ended up in the same room for one reason or another. As I was reading, I was like WTC? And the writing? First I had to go back and nail down whose POV it was going to be in per scene/chapter, because I’m a recovering headhopper (Thanks, Nora. I blame you.) Then I had to print it again and cut scenes. Some were a joke, some were great but not necessary and it was over 100K…almost 120K! I knocked out at least 5,000K just by removing “just”. I might be exaggerating. Probably not.
Then I had to amp up the tension between the two. My main character was too perfect and I wanted him that way when I wrote him, you know before reading a craft book or studying a novel. That meant completely re-writing the first several chapters since their motivations changed. Well his did. Hers is still the same.
Then I had to cut backstory. That knocked most of my word count down. I’m at 95K now (I’ll keep it no more than 100K) I’m still hunting for the right place to enter what I think is important, but haven’t found it, so I just highlight places it might work for when I print it, yet again. I’m almost done with getting it up to par for the kind of first draft I write now…now that I have read craft books, written more, studied more novels and read writing blogs.
I’m not frustrated. It’s been irritating at times, but it’s also been a good laugh and fun to see how far I’ve come and where my strengths and WEAKNESSES lie. And I’ve enjoyed getting to know the characters again, better.
In fact, Julie Jarnagin @JulieJarnagin and I played a #badwriting game one day and tweeted some ridiculous lines we wrote. It was fun and it was a great stress reliever. If you’re interested, tweet some of yours and use the hashtag!
Practice does make progress!
Oh! This Sunday is my 17th anniversary! I know…I look so much younger. I was a wee babe when I married. I kind of was. 19. So this year I’ve been with my husband longer than I’ve been single. We’ve been together 18 years. We’re probably just doing dinner and a movie, but that’s us. We’re simple.
Looks like we’re getting a membership to the Country Club again this year. Here’s all the reasons I don’t belong. I wrote this last summer. Top 5 Reasons I Do Not Belong at the Country Club.
I’m baaaack!! Did you miss me? I missed all of you! Seriously, I did. Okay, before I introduce our lovely guest, Amy Clipston, I want to let you all know the winner for the Wildflowers from Winter drawing is TERRY STRICKLAND!!!! Yay, Terry! Katie Ganshert will be getting you a copy soon! Enjoy!
I met the loveliest author on twitter! If you tweet, come find me and let’s follow and hang out! @jessicarpatch or just Join the Conversation at the side bar! Amy is precious and we hit it right off! You definitely need to hang out with her too! @AmyClipston and her facebook page where she’s always giving something away! Woo hoo!
Amy is the best-selling author of the Kauffman Amish
Bakery series with Zondervan. She has been writing for as long as she can
remember. Her fiction writing “career” began in elementary school
when she and a close friend wrote and shared silly stories. She is a graduate
of Virginia Wesleyan College and a member of the Authors Guild, American
Christian Fiction Writers, and Romance Writers of America. Amy lives in North
Carolina with her husband, two sons, mother, and four spoiled rotten cats.
AC:Some
readers may not know that I’m passionate about organ donation because my
husband recently underwent a second kidney transplant. On June 14, 2011, I
donated a kidney to a stranger and, in exchange, my recipient’s husband gave a
kidney to my husband. This program is called paired kidney donation. Everyone
involved in the transplant is doing really well. I’m thankful my husband has a
new life without dialysis and that I was able to help another family through
the program.
Here’s a teaser for you:
The secret of that mistake leaves Lydia feeling even more restless and
confused, especially when Joshua, the only boy she’s ever loved, becomes
increasingly distant. When a non-Amish boy moves in nearby, Lydia finds someone
who understands her, but the community is convinced Lydia is becoming too
reckless. With the pressures at home and her sister’s worsening condition, a
splintering relationship with Joshua, and her own growing questions over what
is right, Lydia could lose everything that she’s ever held close.
Thanks for hanging out with me today, Amy! It was awesome!
It all began at McAllister’s Deli to support our Haiti Missions Team! A fundraiser. Who doesn’t love to eat to help support missions?
Afterwards we headed back to our Cornerstone Church cafe for assorted teas, scones, and chocolate cake bites! You can’t discuss a young woman’s debut into society without tea and scones. Uh, no…you can’t.
This book was an eye-opener to the times of a young lady trying to find a husband, learning all the rules of etiquette and socializing and fitting in.
Here are some of the comments made:
“Can you imagine having to sleep in a corset? I’d cut that thing off in a heartbeat!”
“I despised the aunt! How vain!”
“I don’t know that society today is less vain than the Victorian women, but I think we go about it in a different way. Both ways are equally sad.”
“I loved learning about the Victorian era and how the young women debuted.”
“I got tired of all the debut season. I skipped pages. I thought it went too slow.”
“I loved the romance and how it ended. I thought it was perfect.”
“I thought the ending was contrived.”
“The theme of God loving us the way we are needed to be said.”
“I’d have never made it in that day. Not if a 30 inch waist was considered overweight!”
I’m taking a blogging break this rest of this week and I’ll be back on Monday, May 14th with special guest, author Amy Clipston! I’ll be around facebook and twitter, not completely out of pocket!
Today answer the question:
Emily with daughter #2, Paisley Kate! |
Daughter #1 Lexie Rae |
Pastor Doug and Emily with baby number #3, son #1, Nathan |
Proud papa, Pastor Doug with Nathan! |
Lots of precious hope fulfilled! |
In honor of Katie’s debut novel releasing soon, she’s giving away a copy of her book to a lucky winner! All you have to do is leave your email address in the comment section if you want to be entered! I will draw the winner through a random generator and announce it on Monday!
*If you are reading this through facebook and can’t comment in the blog comments, let me know in the comments of facebook if you’d like to be entered and I’ll message you if you win!
“If you want to experience God’s blessing in a new way, get
ready to leave your comfort zone.” ~The Word for you Today devotional
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Even when I go from the frying pan into the fryer,
I’m pressing FORWARD.~Jerry Thompson, Cornerstone Church
member |
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Baby Gabriel Bullard, son of Marshal and Jennifer Bullard is moving forward in his car seat! |
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Moving Forward while fast forwarding commercials
during the
Grizzlies game
as they move forward into the
Playoffs!!!!!!!!!
~Ron Mayfield,
Cornerstone Church member |
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Moving forward with a Bronchoscopy!
~
Chelsea Davis, Cornerstone Church member |
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Forwarding teaching
kindergarten!!!
~Pastor Shari Robbins, Cornerstone Church Worship Leader
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Forwarding at the
fire station. ~Jim Carroll, Cornerstone Church member |
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“Forwarding” with some of my friends at Gus’ Famous Fried Chicken. ~Pastor Jeff Robbins, Associate Pastor, Cornerstone Church |
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Putting gas in the car so I can keep going forward! ~Melanie Williamson, Cornerstone Nursery Coordinator and zumba partner! |
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Forwarding in the elevator…going up!!! ~Gayle Adams, Cornerstone Church member |
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Forwarding on the keys! ~Pastor Doug Shuff, Creative Arts Pastor
Cornerstone Church
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Forwarding with new baby, Nathan! ~Emily Shuff,
Creative Arts Pastor’s wife, Cornerstone Church
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Moving
FORWARD…..not looking back!
~Pastor
Greg Davis, Lead Pastor, Cornerstone Church |
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Forwarding on the way to Saturday night prayer! ~Lead Pastor’s wife, Nancy Davis |
I needed a heart change. Pastor confirmed what I’d already
been told by God.
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Forwarding at the Stax with Otis Redding!
~Pam Bruno, Cornerstone Church
member |
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Forwarding in business! Team members, and owners –Steve & Cherie Jones ~all Cornerstone Church members |
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Jessica Brown Forwarding at work! |
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Me reading a book, well duh! What else would I be doing! Oh yeah, writing! |
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Forwarding together! Pastor Bob & Alaine Hallam ~Senior Assoc. Pastor Cornerstone Church |
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Mega-Forwarding ~Jason Turner, Cornerstone Church member (and maybe the smartest guy I know)! |
And more pictures!
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Forwarding in Staff Meeting! ~Melissa Turner, Cornerstone office staff (love working with her!) |
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Forwarding while doing errands! ~Saja Stacks, Cornerstone Church member |
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Forwarding while working with my plants! ~Jan Kerley, Cornerstone Church member |
It just keeps moving forward!
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Blinging Forward! ~Amber Whiteaker, Cornerstone Church member and jewelry consultant! |
Every day’s a holiday with Mary! And I didn’t have to troll for free pics and link back. I’m lazy! |
Friday, LD Masterson tagged me in her post! LD has been on a blogging hiatus and I’m glad she’s back, because every MWF at the end of her posts, she has what she calls, The Groaner of the Day. They crack me up! The tag is to answer 10 questions about yourself and then tag other bloggers, but I’ve recently done this and I have a random facts page, so I’m going to do something different. Hope that’s okay, LD! But swing by her blog and get to know her! Click HERE!
I got an email last week from a friend and you had to answer all the questions using the first letter of your last name if you’re a man, and if you’re a woman the last letter of your MAIDEN name. So I’m going to do that, since I had zero time to play on the email last week. Oh, I accidentally deleted that email, so I’ll be making up some questions.
My maiden name is: Osborn
1. Name a fruit. Orange
2. City Oklahoma City (that is a city, right?)
3. vegetable Okra
4. Reason for being late to work Overslept
5. An exercise Oaring a boat ( I had to get creative!)
6. Animal Orangutan
7. Movie Oceans 11
8. Song Ocean Wide (The Afters)
9.Something you might say to a child Only if you clean your room!
10. Term of endearment Odysseus (You know, like Adonis only not.) LOL Ack!
Now it’s your turn! Leave your answers in the comments or play the game on your blog! Be sure to let me know, so I can come read your answers. 🙂
Oooh, on a side-note, I have book club tonight and we’re discussing Siri Mitchell’s book, She Walks in Beauty! We’re having tea and scones after some of us meet at a deli for dinner, part of the proceeds go to our Haiti Missions Team at church (and I have a surprise for the ladies)!
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Us chillin at the fair. I’m sittin on my butt. What? It was cold! |
Monday, I talked about BBQing at the Springfest and how we rode rides, well my kids did–I tried not to throw up.
I loved watching my 7 year old experience it. The food, music, atmosphere, rides, games. All of it.
He’s read books about fairs. I have too. In fact, I love experiencing new things through stories, but some things like events and places need to be a hands-on experience.
Like the fair.
For example, I enjoyed a book about women who wore corsets and got ready for their debut, but I do NOT want to experience a corset hands-on. My uterus’ll fall out. It will! Just read about them! I also loved reading about a guy who sky-dived, but I don’t think I need the hands-on experience, but you may say differently, so…
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Today, I’m talking about smothering.
In my Howdunit Forensics: A Guide for Writers, D.P. Lyle says, “Smothering
occurs when some external device prevents air from entering the nose or
mouth.”
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photo credit: Salvatore Vuono/freedigitalphotos |
All I knew was I had
to get to Jesus. So I raised my hands, and like I’d been taught in Sunday school when singing Jesus Love Me, dropped the towel and brought my middle finger to
the palm of my left hand and then repeated it with my right. Back and forth,
wildly. Sign language.
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